I need some corrections In the essay that is attached below.
I want you to change the topic to( study abroad is worth the cost and effort ) yes.
You have to choose your position firstly which is yes( pros), so the thesis statements should be about pros of studying abroad and the body paragraphs as well. You have to use just 2 references in the essay so that will be 20-25% of the essay. by the way, I think that the concluding looks fine. ( please donâ€™t mention cons in the ea)
700-800 words , double spaced, new times Roman.