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1) Plan Parenthood is an nonprofit organization that help people control their sexual reproductive lifestyle through education, contraceptives and even abortion. The only analysis that  I have feelings about is the fact that they help teenagers. As a parent I would feel indifferently if my teenage adolescent is making decisions to have an abortions in which I’m not aware about because of how it will affect her body and emotions. What if the teenagers are repeat abortions offenders and was not truly receptive in taking preventative measure as a parent this would raise a concern for me.

2)Doctors without Borders mission statement:

Médecins Sans Frontières provides assistance to populations in distress, to victims of natural or man-made disasters and to victims of armed conflict. They do so irrespective of race, religion, creed or political convictions.

Médecins Sans Frontières observes neutrality and impartiality in the name of universal medical ethics and the right to humanitarian assistance and claims full and unhindered freedom in the exercise of its functions.

Members undertake to respect their professional code of ethics and to maintain complete independence from all political, economic, or religious powers.

As volunteers, members understand the risks and dangers of the missions they carry out and make no claim for themselves or their assigns for any form of compensation other than that which the association might be able to afford them.

The people they serve are the “populations in distress, to victims of natural or man-made disasters and to victims of armed conflict”. 

Reduce at 16 words: Help those victims who are in distress from natural/man-made disaster and victims of arm conflicts.

Reduce at 8 words: Provides assistance for those who are in distress.

Reduce at 4 words: Distress victims receives help.

1. I think the analysis for Doctors Without Borders was a bit confusing.  I think this is due to the fact that the mission statement is not easy to target on the organizations web site.  I visited the site, and under charter, it states, “Doctors Without Borders/Médecins Sans Frontières (MSF) is a private international association. The association is made up mainly of doctors and health sector workers and is also open to all other professions which might help in achieving its aims.”  Then, there is a list of principles that they aim to follow.  I think the added principles make it tricky to drill down on the specific points that the group is trying to achieve.  With that said, I feel like the analysis could have focused on the main mission statement as a whole rather than adding each principle.
2. Here is the mission statement for Zoetis:

“We build on a six decade history and singular focus on animal health to bring customers quality products, services and a commitment to their businesses.”

16 words:  Six decade history focus on animal health bring quality products services and commitment to their businesses

8 words:  animal health quality products and services to businesses

4 words:  animal health products/services