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I need help writing a short scripts.

Synopsis of story:

Phoebe is a young girl about 12 who stares out the window each day because she is unable to leave her home. Everyday she begs her mother to let her out of the house but she is constantly rejected. So she makes up imaginary friends to keep her from getting lonely. One day one of her characters Evan urges her to sneak out. She is very conflicted and is contemplating sneaking out. Here I need some help with some possible rising action? In the climax of the story she climbs out the window with a rope made of her bedding and slips under the fence. She wanders out into the world and she is speaking with her characters all the time. Suddenly boys walk by and begin to taunt her and we as an audience find out why she was not allowed out of the house(her face is severely burned on one side). She cries and runs into the real evan. She tells him that she doesn’t understand why people treat her this way and he tells her that she is beautiful and that it doesn’t matter. They walk back to the house and she introduces evan to all her characters. From then on he visits her everyday. I like the basic plot but I think that there are some loose ends and that I could develop things a bit more. Any suggestions would be great!

Scenes Included:

Scene1: Opening Jungle Safari

Scene 2: Breakfast

Scene 3: Wishing to build a snowman

Scene 4: Planning to leave

Scene 5: Out in the world

Scene 6: Teasing

Scene 7: Crying with Evan

Scene 8: Walking Home

Scene 9: Evan comes to visit (fade out)

 

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